CommentsDevious Comments Hay! Thank you a lot for giving me your opinion!
Actually, giving colors to my drawings is something very, absolutely very hard to me, I liked the way how you explained your point of view...really, I really liked it, so I'll try in another next time what do you told me. Well...I have a little "basics" known about proportions in general, I see how it works arms, hands and legs...but the little problem is that is a trouble to me put it in practice, now going out the theory's part...I need really much help with these parts. I think concepts and ideas are OK, but still I need more practice and practice...that's something that my parents and so many people in the dA community told me. I'm really glad about this, and I feel merry of read this awesome critique.  So Helchikaah, if you have any tips, tutorial or something else to get better in a link, it would be a pleasure to take those recommendations, really! So, thank you a lot hunny   Keep developing your style too! -- [insert signature here]  Well proportions can be worked if you keep practicing ^^ Since your furries seem to be humanly proportionate, you might want to practice by checking real life models, it helps a lot (we did that at school)! ^^ Maybe you could check some nude models on dA (since trying to find a real life model in real life would be hard, lol), I think there's a lot of good ones
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I personally think that the texture on the character makes him a bit too "ghostly", but I don't know if that was the intention.
Also, the fact you used the "cellshading" style for most of the pic and just a little "softer" brush to make some highlight might be a little weird. If you could use both technique a little more equally, I think this could be more interesting.
The gun's color seems a little flat to me. Its color also looks too light. Since it seems to be in a more shadowy place, I think making its whole color darker and adding little highlight would be a little more beautiful to the eyes, as giving a shiny effect on the gun.
I think the right arms looks also flat. I don't know how to explain it.. It looks like the whole lower arm is of equal volume the whole length. I think giving the length different volume would be a little more interesting.
Sorry, I'm a newbie in giving critique >_<
But at whole, the concept seems very interesting. ^_^ Keep up the good work!